Six Sentence Sunday – Brand New Me
April 22, 2012
Here’s another bit from Brand New Me. It follows on from the six sentences from a couple of weeks ago–Deirdre’s dance with Tom. And this is what she feels like when the dance is over.
He brought her upright again slowly in the midst of the noise and applause. She felt her face growing warm. What should she say? What could she say after something like that? She felt like she’d just engaged in some kind of sex act in front of a large crowd of beer drinkers. And she wasn’t even embarrassed—just sort of stunned.
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Great combination of her thoughts and the action. Well done.
Thanks!
Love the way this is presented. Nice six!
Great 6, could feel her inner sense of wonder!
Great to see her inside reaction here. Great six!
Thanks, y’all!